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The Dark Tournament

Should the NPC have shown Nightmares

  • yes- more depth and environment

    Votes: 8 100.0%
  • no-takes away from the pcs

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    8
  • Poll closed .
Why he'll be sucked into those sexy silver eyes of course and fall for her hard! Either that or he'll run for his life and between Cassie and Amara will decide to avoid all girls from then on.
Awww what an adorable dork Floyd is! There's a good chance she'll be kind just because he's an adorable Dedenne of a guy.

As for cass if she wanders the hotel at night I can definatly fuck with her.
Well, she'll have Floyd around then! XD
 
Well I plan on introducing one more Npc just for a small intro to mess with Delilah.
What? Someone is going to tell the girl that she can't be rocking out on her own theme song so loudly, in the evening, in a hotel where she's surrounded by others people, many of which are dead tired from a long journey?
 
Your character is approved
Oh yay, neat. So should I just dive in or wait until the next in text day if everyone seems to be turned in for the moment aside from the character you said you're introducing and Floyd and Cassie. By the by, I read through all of it so far so I think i'm caught up unless I skimmed a few important details I wasn't aware of.
 
Oh yay, neat. So should I just dive in or wait until the next in text day if everyone seems to be turned in for the moment aside from the character you said you're introducing and Floyd and Cassie. By the by, I read through all of it so far so I think i'm caught up unless I skimmed a few important details I wasn't aware of.
I recommend making sure you get all the details from the character intro's in this thread as well. But other than that you're free to jump in whenever you like and pester whoever you fancy. Go join the red haired lady in the restaurant area, or pick a fight with the man and his Mightyena a few tables over. Flirt with Salem, get robbed by Lady, pick on Floyd and earn the wrath of all the ladies posting in this thread, or go pound on Amara's door ruining the poor girls day even further. So many option really. ;)
 
Huh, is it strange that I got a wave of sadness from Cassie's character when I read Salem's leave, also in his slight shift in character there, I don't know if this was intentional or not, or if I'm seeing things. It's very intriguing.
 
She tilted her head back to make eye contact with him and he winked. Like trainer like Pokemon, she thought.
I just want to point out that I could not stop laughing when I read this part. I could just picture Cassie huffing and rolling her eyes in exasperation. I am so pleased you commented on it the way I hoped you would.

Huh, is it strange that I got a wave of sadness from Cassie's character when I read Salem's leave, also in his slight shift in character there, I don't know if this was intentional or not, or if I'm seeing things. It's very intriguing.
I've picked out all my words very carefully. I'm curious to learn how you interpret everything and how Cassie will respond to things.
 
Sorry about all the questions, but I just want to ask if I may add a little bit of "depth" towards Damian and have him be Sinnoh Champ? Im not sure if that spot was taken in this story or not by an existing character but Im just thinking of Damian from a broader perspective and ways to play with him since I literally thought of the character while asking if I could join haha
 
I could just picture Cassie huffing and rolling her eyes in exasperation.
Nah, it's more like... A flat, deadpan face really. It's funny how you got the impression that she would do that, she's the type of person to go, "Oh, well that happened. Okay. Cool." than actually get fired up and angry. Nevertheless, I'm happy to please.
 
Sorry about all the questions, but I just want to ask if I may add a little bit of "depth" towards Damian and have him be Sinnoh Champ? Im not sure if that spot was taken in this story or not by an existing character but Im just thinking of Damian from a broader perspective and ways to play with him since I literally thought of the character while asking if I could join haha
Well, one of Astral's characters is already, the Sinnoh champ, so, no I don't think so.
 
Sorry about all the questions, but I just want to ask if I may add a little bit of "depth" towards Damian and have him be Sinnoh Champ? Im not sure if that spot was taken in this story or not by an existing character but Im just thinking of Damian from a broader perspective and ways to play with him since I literally thought of the character while asking if I could join haha
Honestly I think you add more dept to the character by not making him any sort of champion.
 
Sorry about all the questions, but I just want to ask if I may add a little bit of "depth" towards Damian and have him be Sinnoh Champ? Im not sure if that spot was taken in this story or not by an existing character but Im just thinking of Damian from a broader perspective and ways to play with him since I literally thought of the character while asking if I could join haha

Sinnoh champ is taken by one of Astrals characters. Sorry.

Honestly I think you add more dept to the character by not making him any sort of champion.

Basically what he said.
 
I'm thinking about putting Dalilah on the same hotel floor as Salem and that he has to pass by her room to get to his own further down the hallway, but i'll wait and see what you have planned first Astralkitsune.
 
I don't mind questions at all. Amara is the current sinnoh champ but if you want to be a past champ or a different league that is ok or even someone who lost to one of the final fours.
 
Had a bit of a block with the first post but figured I should get one out there :/ I'm not sure if I want to follow up on the champion Idea or not, but would Unova be open to be the champ of?
 
This is unrelated, but when Salem told Cassie his room number, I had to restrain from having Cassie tease him about wanting her in his room ahaha!
I saw a similar scenario in my mind when I was writing my entry and therefor look some liberties and kinda forced Cassie to want to say something there. But on the off chance that she actually would tell him her room number I had Salem decide to leave. If he found out her room number there was a chance he would feel the urge to visit her and he knows he's bad a resisting urges. In short he didn't want to tempt himself into forcing his company on her too much if that makes any sense.
 
I saw a similar scenario in my mind when I was writing my entry and therefor look some liberties and kinda forced Cassie to want to say something there. But on the off chance that she actually would tell him her room number I had Salem decide to leave. If he found out her room number there was a chance he would feel the urge to visit her and he knows he's bad a resisting urges. In short he didn't want to tempt himself into forcing his company on her too much if that makes any sense.
Is it strange that I managed to conclude this all by myself? I connected the dots when I read your explanation on Salem being bad at resisting urges, and in an attempt at common curtesy, Cassie would tell him her's. But still, I have to commend your ability to predict and move things in the direction you want. You'd be deadly in a battle sequence. :p
 
"A peaceful evening stroll, accompanied by the symphony of Kricketune and Noctowl somewhere in the greens."

I honestly couldn't help but laugh at this sentence from your most recent post Pen. I can just imagine the Kricketunes Cry in the distance...

'DELELELELE WHOOOOP'

I know what you were trying to get at though, it was an amazing post.
 
I have to commend your ability to predict and move things in the direction you want. You'd be deadly in a battle sequence. :p
I hadn't considered that yet to be honest. In most RP's I've done I always sorta pulled back from combat situations to let those that enjoyed such things more have freer reign. But then again, before I started here I had no idea I could write at all, let alone well enough for people to positively comment on it. So maybe I'll enjoy combat a lot more than I think I will.
 
"A peaceful evening stroll, accompanied by the symphony of Kricketune and Noctowl somewhere in the greens."

I honestly couldn't help but laugh at this sentence from your most recent post Pen. I can just imagine the Kricketunes Cry in the distance...

'DELELELELE WHOOOOP'

I know what you were trying to get at though, it was an amazing post.

Ha! You got me laughing too now. See that I understood what kind of scene was being depicted here, but not knowing those Pokemon mentioned the details were lost on me.

Thanks for the soundfile :D
 
"A peaceful evening stroll, accompanied by the symphony of Kricketune and Noctowl somewhere in the greens."

I honestly couldn't help but laugh at this sentence from your most recent post Pen. I can just imagine the Kricketunes Cry in the distance...

'DELELELELE WHOOOOP'

I know what you were trying to get at though, it was an amazing post.
Let us listen to the music of the strange world of Pokemon... *que Kricketune and Chatot cries*

Imagine the possibility though, with a violin body, they'd be able to play a lot more than just a battle cry. It'd actually be pretty beautiful.

Especially if they're exposed to a luxury resort ambiance like every single day.
 
Let us listen to the music of the strange world of Pokemon... *que Kricketune and Chatot cries*

Imagine the possibility though, with a violin body, they'd be able to play a lot more than just a battle cry. It'd actually be pretty beautiful.

True, it even states in it's dex entry that It can make more than that one cry.
"It crosses its knifelike arms in front of its chest when it cries. It can compose melodies ad lib."


Ha! You got me laughing too now. See that I understood what kind of scene was being depicted here, but not knowing those Pokemon mentioned the details were lost on me.

Thanks for the soundfile :D

No problemo.
 
Imagine the possibility though, with a violin body, they'd be able to play a lot more than just a battle cry. It'd actually be pretty beautiful.
Wow I didn't know it was actually an instrument Pokemon. If it can play melodies like this I so want to catch one!

You really would be a useful Pokedex! I should catch you too and make you tell me spontanious Pokemon info haha!
Hey! Get in line!
 
He had spiky hair died with several streaks in order to look like a dancing flame. His build was lean but tough and athletic and he had golden eyes. Right under his his eyes were four small red stones. Each eye had two dermal piercings below it. He wore black finger less gloves on both hands and each glove had a mounted Fire evolutionary stone inset on the back. As she turned his way he locked her gaze with his own and calmly ate two ghost peppers in succession without even a twitch. Then he put the cigarette back to his lips and blew a perfect heart smoke ring before winking at her and walking back inside.
Oh my Jeebus, this guy sent a shiver down my spine. Am I the only one that just crinched at this guy's creepiness?
 
Oh my Jeebus, this guy sent a shiver down my spine. Am I the only one that just crinched at this guy's creepiness?

I kinda cringed a bit, he seems really intent on showing off. Not showing off in a Delilah or Alex way. He's the type of character that Floyd doesn't like.
 
Heh wasn't quite trying to go for creepiness but I guess it came across that way :p
Well to each his/her own really. He just has a lot of things going for him that are totally not my thing, but that also makes his existence in this story interesting. I'll have to decide how Salem deals with his type.
 
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