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The Dark Tournament
- Thread starter Astralkitsune
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Dawn of Day 2 and there's already so much to love from the posts.
Heh, her nightmare will make you cry!
@Loziana Whoa. Well damn. I got nothing...that's a scary nightmare, mate, short as it was.
I have my nightmare idea formulated, it's just I want to finish what Gerald was doing, like, before that. Unless I don't have to, in which case hallelujah because I don't know what June will do to keep the light from escaping.
I have my nightmare idea formulated, it's just I want to finish what Gerald was doing, like, before that. Unless I don't have to, in which case hallelujah because I don't know what June will do to keep the light from escaping.
That' up to Pen
*looks to Burb's alpha"
*looks to Burb's alpha"
Ehm... You could just use wide leaves to cover the holes with as to not have their camp be a literal lighthouse.
Cassie was bluffing her reasons for wanting a deep fire pit. She just didn't want to be able to see the fire. Otherwise, she'd be sleeping outside regardless of the rabid pokemon.
Well 7-0 guess it's going to be a busy night 
I was thinking of that, but considered how they would be held up.
But this is series where a pile of gems can fight giant trees that are somehow considered dragons. I think I can find a way.
Collapses~ POSTED! I put it in a spoiler it due to it being ahh...~cough~7~cough~ pages long. I'm reading over it again to try and make sure it isn't typo tastic. So please forgive me if I missed something!!!
Wow Curvykitten, that was an amazing read. I feel like a single 'like' really isn't enough.
I love your writing style, it just flows so smoothly and feels very fluffy, or maybe that's just Lily's influence. You've picked a great character and do a wonderful job bringing her to life. I can't wait to see more of her, the poor girl. I really feel like just offering her a hand to stand back up, so she can keep going.
I like your Panda as well, and imagine that he and Ajax would be great rival buddies. I can easily imagine them having a competition in whoever can find the most relaxing position to nap in.
All in all, a very good job and I'm glad you've decided to join us. Looking forward to interacting with Lily.
I love your writing style, it just flows so smoothly and feels very fluffy, or maybe that's just Lily's influence. You've picked a great character and do a wonderful job bringing her to life. I can't wait to see more of her, the poor girl. I really feel like just offering her a hand to stand back up, so she can keep going.
I like your Panda as well, and imagine that he and Ajax would be great rival buddies. I can easily imagine them having a competition in whoever can find the most relaxing position to nap in.
All in all, a very good job and I'm glad you've decided to join us. Looking forward to interacting with Lily.
OH MY GOSH....hehe you have no idea how happy it makes me to know you enjoyed reading the post. I worked very hard on it and am always worry about the outcome. I keep going back and worrying if I should tweak or edit it hehe.
And yeah Lily adds the bit of fluffy. I hope to see her grow into a strong, confident young woman as the game goes on. I have no doubt our GM will challange her, so I look forward to seeing how she may handle it all.
Also Dynami so wins best napper...~he nods firmly~ And best pillow! LOL I can see the two getting along as well. Should be fun to see those two pushing each other hehe.
And yeah Lily adds the bit of fluffy. I hope to see her grow into a strong, confident young woman as the game goes on. I have no doubt our GM will challange her, so I look forward to seeing how she may handle it all.
Also Dynami so wins best napper...~he nods firmly~ And best pillow! LOL I can see the two getting along as well. Should be fun to see those two pushing each other hehe.
Ah, I completely share this sentiment. But your writing is a lot more solid than mine. It flows better. It's clear you have a good grasp on the language and know how to tell a story. I never felt like you were just listing facts as I sometimes see with others.
Lily feels so light and fluffy despite having a strong resolve. I hope she gets to keep that airy feeling. She'll add a nice new perspective to the story, I'm sure.
It has taken several years to get where I am now, specially considering I'm dyslexic. It was a lot harder to get to where I am now. And I know I still have a lot to learn. Action posts still tend to be tough for me and I know I can ramble sometimes. hehe Trust me everyone gets better if they keep trying. I know I have enjoyed reading your posts, we have some really great writers here actually.
Nods~ I'm hoping always holds onto some of that light. I think she has some growing to do, and a some time to discover how strong she really is. It will be tough balancing that with her inner fluffy, but I hope to pull it off nicely. Music helps with that, its my muse juice.
Plus, Lily's theme song! I totally saw her getting back up at that pivotal moment as I listened to this song. Total muse juice!
HEY!, assigning the theme songs is my job! And I already have some idea for what I want to assign Lily and Dynami. All you can do is just nod and like it!
Are you getting jealous that she picked a good song before you could? Revenge or choose another song for her?HEY!, assigning the theme songs is my job! And I already have some idea for what I want to assign Lily and Dynami. All you can do is just nod and like it!
I have an idea. Maybe the nightmares are caused by the virus the Pokemon got. What if as soon as you kill the Pokemon the virus is realeased into the air? Then inhaled and causes hallucinations and memory distortion.
OPPPS! hehe ok, well lets see what you got music man!HEY!, assigning the theme songs is my job! And I already have some idea for what I want to assign Lily and Dynami. All you can do is just nod and like it!
giggles~
The Dark Tournament
by Pokecharms RP
Album
01 Aidinia Moon
02 Akira Hatimosho
03 Alex Weston
04 Amara Landos
05 Apollo Soulis *New
06 Cassandra Michaels
07 Damian Salvator
08 Delilah Jones
09 Drake Valentine
10 Efret
11 Erejest Nevashi
12 Floyd Johnstone
13 Gerald Aster
14 Lily Matherson *New
15 Mathew
16 Mysterious Man
17 Salem Archon
18 Willamina Soren Danials the Third
Pokemon 01 Beedrill (Beedrill)
Pokemon 02 Blastoise (Ajax)
Pokemon 03 Delphox (June)
Pokemon 04 Gardevoir (Ecarte)
Pokemon 05 Lapras (Crystal)
Pokemon 06 Liepard (Lady)
Pokemon 07 Lucario (Orion)
Pokemon 08 Mightyena (Anubis)
Pokemon 09 Pangoro (Dynami) *New
Pokemon 10 Pyroar (Vulcana)
Pokemon 11 Starmie (Swift)
Pokemon 12 Sylveon (Alex)
Pokemon 13 Togepi (Kiwi) *New
Bonus 01 Amnis Colo *New
Bonus 02 The Dark Tournament
Bonus 03 Team Rocket
by Pokecharms RP
Album
01 Aidinia Moon
02 Akira Hatimosho
03 Alex Weston
04 Amara Landos
05 Apollo Soulis *New
06 Cassandra Michaels
07 Damian Salvator
08 Delilah Jones
09 Drake Valentine
10 Efret
11 Erejest Nevashi
12 Floyd Johnstone
13 Gerald Aster
14 Lily Matherson *New
15 Mathew
16 Mysterious Man
17 Salem Archon
18 Willamina Soren Danials the Third
Pokemon 01 Beedrill (Beedrill)
Pokemon 02 Blastoise (Ajax)
Pokemon 03 Delphox (June)
Pokemon 04 Gardevoir (Ecarte)
Pokemon 05 Lapras (Crystal)
Pokemon 06 Liepard (Lady)
Pokemon 07 Lucario (Orion)
Pokemon 08 Mightyena (Anubis)
Pokemon 09 Pangoro (Dynami) *New
Pokemon 10 Pyroar (Vulcana)
Pokemon 11 Starmie (Swift)
Pokemon 12 Sylveon (Alex)
Pokemon 13 Togepi (Kiwi) *New
Bonus 01 Amnis Colo *New
Bonus 02 The Dark Tournament
Bonus 03 Team Rocket
Ha! Mega Gallade X is shipping Salem and Lily!
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I wonder what it is with characters appearing in each others dreams and messing things up.
Salem rapes Aidinia, Lily gets pushed off a cliff by Lin, Cassie gets thrown into the fire by Salem...
I just realized Salem is actually causing a lot of grief apparently.
Oh yikes, I meant for that to be a Damian and his unnamed significant other before she passed
@Curvykitten you don't need to put your post in a spoiler like that. It's beautiful, especially with the length, and it'd be wasted to just be hidden like that. If anything, you should be proud that it's so long and detailed!
Ok finally at work when I get a chance I will read curvey's post
Looks like I'm behind by quite a bit. I'll take the liberty of speeding things along a little bit.
Can people dream when unconscious in the way Floyd is? If you can then I'll just make that his dream sequence.
Also, amazing post Curvy! Keep it up.
Can people dream when unconscious in the way Floyd is? If you can then I'll just make that his dream sequence.
Also, amazing post Curvy! Keep it up.
Thanks! Started typing it up on my phone while walking to work xD I just love the psychotic TV/radio host bit. I've tried it a few times, and I'm hoping to eventually find a good balance between silly and creepy.
Now gonna read Curvy's post :3 super excite!
Brilliant writing everyone. This is why I run games.
you'll get it nova I have faith in your skill
First dream is up. I hope everyone likes it. That is not my normal writing style so the sentence structure is grammatically bad in places.
Huh, I didn't see this before, but, now that I remember... Curt has green eyes too.
Second post finally up.There will be a delay before the next. My pt never showed and I will be driving home.
I know man, it was obvious and you did a good job. I'm just messing with youOh yikes, I meant for that to be a Damian and his unnamed significant other before she passed
Yikes I have a feeling that does not bode well for poor Apollo
I find it very interesting to see what sort of nightmares these characters are getting. I guess it shows a bit of their inner nature when considering their fears. So far I can put them in two categories. The ones who's fear is for themselves, shown in bad things happening to their own person. The other, who's greater fear is for what they do onto others rather than what's done to them. And then there is Damian, who gets tormented by happy dreams of what 'could have been.'
Good stuff people.
Also, while reading Delilah's Nightmare I knew the perfect music to fit too the scene. In my head I heard 'this' play during the glitching news broadcast. The song also applies well to some of the other nightmares, but Delilah's in particular in my opinion.
Good stuff people.
Also, while reading Delilah's Nightmare I knew the perfect music to fit too the scene. In my head I heard 'this' play during the glitching news broadcast. The song also applies well to some of the other nightmares, but Delilah's in particular in my opinion.